All Comments on 'Dark Elf's Shirohebi Slave'

Just wow. That was intense. Especially the part where Shrike got what she has bargained for.

I only wonder how did she break so easily. Treating people the way she did, leading the slaver raids, it all takes spirit.

Hoping for continuation, anyway. It's a very interesting world you're building.

Read this one for 100 years later.

thanks. I'm happy when you are happy.

My Dear.

Bullies break fastest when they are faced with their fears.

Shrike's fear is strangulation.

This was really good, the intensity of bullies facing their fears and gettting broken were epic!

I hope you carry through and continue. Does Shrike ever return to Leon?

Of course. He and her will have a nice life with bwabies.

And I laughed. And I fapped. Then I laughed and fapped again.

I hope I end up playing strip poker against someone as naive and easy to read as Yuki- even if it isn't a sexy albino shrine maiden snake girl