All Comments on 'Dark Genie Ch. 06'

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SplitAcesSplitAcesalmost 9 years ago
This is pathetic

Beyond pointless.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

I hope this goes on. The story is well worth it. Especially now that we have an interesting villain with a plan.

hunter_killerhunter_killerabout 8 years ago
Don't continue letting this happen

I hope you don't make a habit of showing villain destroying lives. It makes for good development but that along with rape, forced submission, blackmail, ect, are a serious mood killer. It should only be used once as a character builder, not a thing of habit (especially when involving the main characters). As a side note, I hope you find a way for Venus to be the one to finally kill the bastard.

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