All Comments on 'Dark Marbles'

Why did you put the story into the 'Mind Control' category?

Was it because you were trying to control o u r minds and keep them captured with your tale?

I don't agree with your category, mind control. Loving couples, maybe. However, it was a good story.

Eight pages of wasted time, wow this was some unbelievable boring garbage....

Another great story exploring the issues involved in swapping partners. Probably tales such as yours should be mandatory reading for those considering swapping although would be swappers could care less about your take on the subject.

I think this is the 3rd shaggy dog story you've written on this subject, I'm loving them all you know. I'm beginning to take it that you don't write about women on women though. Another facet to these swapping situations.

I certainly am vicariously enjoying your descriptions of these situations though through your posts.

gg

Nice ending! Who would have thought it might work out like that.I am sure many couples “talk”about doing this but so many don’t have the “luck” to have it work out like these two couples.

Sexually stimulating…especially as a talking point between couples.

Thanks for this.

Beejay3