All Comments on 'Dark Night with an Old Flame'

that was one hot story, has she got a sister.

steve

when there is a twist at the end — and this was a cute twist, even if a littttllleee difficult to believe. But what the heck, that's what suspension of disbelieve is all about...

Well done. The twist at the end amped it up immeasurably.

As a veteran I was able to share the thrill your protagonist

felt at having a lover appear at her base. Unfortunately an old friend from technical school was the best I ever saw.

You definitely go into some HOT Sex . It feels a bit rushed ,aching for a sequel even. Then you lay that wondrous ending on us.

Keep the stories coming , they just keep getting better.

great story "titiana"!-Shannon

despite the 'twist' at the end, she's a skank. Lost interest and sort of glossed over most of it.