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All Comments on 'Dark Plantation Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
I like it

Not a fan of this theme but i like the story so far cant wait for next part.

Only_connectOnly_connectover 3 years ago

Not sure about this. A tricky subject to be tackling. Can you make it truly erotic, sensitive and exciting? Not sure anyone can.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
My 2 cents

More. I am interested in see where you go with this. Thanks for your time and imagination.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Hero

Intriguing storyline. My hope is power corrupts and liberal Marv lets his his inner beast run free. Like Tina says: "we don't need another hero".

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Decent start

I want to see where you go with this. It has the beginnings of a good read. Flesh it out more and make the chapters a bit longer, 2 - 3 pages per. Can't wait to see what more you wright.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Nice!

Pecos_P3t3Pecos_P3t3almost 2 years ago

Good beginning. You establish the terms and the tone. Can't wait to read more.

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Started writing when I got tired of thinking about what a story would be like if characters did this or that, and decided to start writing it myself. Many of my stories will have hard and weird Non-consent themes.

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