by thoros
OH Come On..You Cant Leave it Like That, if Your Not Going to FUCKING Finish it Dont Fucking Write it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Very Intriguing. I wish there was more to read. Won't you please update?
Plese update its been months since you last updates please do so!!
The writing is wonderful and I really get pulled into the story. Ones simply wants to know what will happen next.I cannot wait for you to continue to the next chapter, I will be patiently waiting.
with many ways that it could go. You might try reading over it one more time during editing, to catch the little things you missed. Otherwise, it was fantastic.
Great prologue. Loved the idea that we don't know their names and getting a glimpse of what brought them to this point. Please continue.