All Comments on 'Dark Stag Ch. 04'

Yes, interesting and very challenging when it comes to imagining all the concepts of training the birds and imagining how the structures used look like, I hope Kijus will end up with Richard but I'll have to reread the whole story once it's all posted. Interesting story this one.

The detail on the raptors is superb and very interesting. I hope we will get more detail on the human characters in future chapters. Hoping Roi & Jon stay together and that Kijus & Richard get together. At this point I find all 4 characters likable and all seem to be growing and improving, with the possible exception of Kijus... would like to have more revealed about what is going on with him soon. Please keep writing. You are doing a wonderful job.

I freaking love this story. And you're awesome for putting all this research into writing it.