All Comments on 'Dark Temptations, Dark Desires Ch. 03'

by SinandSmut

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Fuck, 5 stars. Almost gave me a heart attack.

I was a little worried with the first 2 chapters having no sex, so I had high expectations for this one to deliver. And boy did it deliver, been a very long time since I read an ntr remotely this good. Love how cortana was depicted as this naughty to then bat shit insane, arrogant hottie. Genius. Write more stories, keep up the good work, because I'd say your very talented in this genre, if not the best on this site.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
5 Stars

Loved all three parts. Can't wait for part four. Keep up the great work!

newmantopleasenewmantopleaseover 6 years ago
Love this story!

I think it’s great we’re starting to see more cuck stories where our fav white action heroes get cucked. Like that other MJ and Miles Morales story & this story is just another great addition to this genre!

gazlenetakgazlenetakover 2 years ago

damn, too bad this was never continued

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