All Comments on 'Dark Travelers Ch. 08'

I can't tell you how thrilled I was to see chapter 8, especially since I was one of those readers who begged. Thank you for posting. I know you mentioned earlier that you were interested in starting another story (which I know I will enjoy reading, you're a wonderful writer), but please, please, make sure to finish this one. Now, as to the parts that I like; I like it all. What I am really enjoying is the slow recognition from the boys, perhaps not as much with Kael, that the girls have an inner strength that has nothing to do with brute force.

Thanks again for the post

lol at the translation! I think My favorite character(s) would be the puppy!!!! I'm just a huge animal lover and the puppy actually lightens the group a bit-- I think. But other than that I really like Kirik. I know this is gonna sound really weird but every time I form an image of the brothers in my head they kinda turn out to look like Link from Zelda, hahah. Thanks for updating so quick!!!

Seriously it's that good. You should look into publishing this. I think my favorite character is Kael. I was alot like him when I was a teenager. I didn't kill or rape but I mean my attitude was the same.

and lololololololol at the translation XD

I'm loving the entire story. My fav characters are deff. the brothers. Can't wait for the next chapter.

I love all the characters... But I like Kael & Andi the best!! More hot scenes for those two, please!!!

I was so happy that you posted so soon. I love this series. Hopefully we can get an early chapter again. And Kael and Kirik omg I am speechless, I loved the way Kirik got pissed at the bartender for saying such awful things to Anya.

Such a fast update! Here I was preparing myself for another long wait but you're just full of surprises Gina. I'm enjoying this little series immensely! The pace I think is perfect, not too fast but not too slow. I just hope to see the completion of this in the future. I also totally agree with Rbn8! I adore Andi and Kael as well as Tots. They are each unique in their own ways. I look forward to the next chapter and keep up the good work Gina! :)

I love the dynamics of the group as a whole. Horace is an especially interesting element. He appreciates the ferocity of the Feylak brothers, while offering subtle support to the girls.

I'd be done with it by now. It's hard to wait for the next chapter. I'd be up in the wee hours finishing this off. The characters are great; the setting is fascinating; and the epic journey is looking really interesting. The sense of humor is really important. I think Horace helps with that a lot. I think my favorite part of the story is the sort of 'clash of cultures' going on with Kael and Andi. The miscommunication is great and adds a lot of tension. I wonder what will happen with the two of them if it gets sorted out. The differences between the way the human care for each other versus the feylak should be interesting as the two couples come together in their own ways. I'm really excited for the continuation of this story.

The only thing I think needs work is the very beginning. I appreciate the description of the setting but I think it could be more successful through the eyes of one of the characters as apposed to a bird's eye view of it all. By the time you introduce Anya and Andi I was skimming and had to go back.

Amazing work. Can't wait for more.

So the adventure continues for our group plus one wizard. It sounds like you are about to take us on a fantastic journey. Do Feylak get sea sick? Exactly how many ingredients does the wizard? When will Anya start to developed her abilities? And so many other questions. Would love to have the next chapter as quickly as I got this one hint-hint

I keep bouncing back and forth between Kirik and Anya as to who I like best individually, AND I can't decide which couple I like best: Kirik & Anya or Kael & Andi... you keep making them all so good, it's impossible to chose! Please post again soon, this quick post of this short chapter is such a tease - but I love it!

I def. agree, I love each character in their own way, but I think I like Kael the best. As for whose relationship I like the best, it would def. have to be Kirik and Anya's b/c of the sexual tension that is slowly building (that even THEY don't seem aware of). It really seems like at first even you weren't sure where this was going, but somehow, you found a way to channel the muses. There are sooo many directions you could take this in. Where are they going? Who are they going to meet? Is Horace who he appears? Are the girls going to meet any dashing pirates that'll cause some major jealousy issues for the Feylak's (heehee)? Will Tater's find a cute poodle girlfriend of his own, lol? I just KNOW the next sex scene b/w Andi and Kael is going to be super delicious! I love love love this story Gina, it's so great, PLEASE keep it coming!!!

So far this is turning into something wonderful. I keep anticipating the next chapter.

Just one thing. Have you thought of using italics to distinguish between thoughts and regular sentences? It really helps me when I'm writing, especially when my characters are going to do a lot of "talking" to themselves or I use telepathy.

Definitely keep up the good work.

I agree with those who say this should be published. If you are feeling insecure on that front, please read some Sherrilyn Kenyon or Heather Killough-Walden. You will see how superior your writing is to their schlock -- and these are popular authors! From what I know of the publishing world (I have a friend who has published many books) you'll have to deal with lots of rejection slips until you get discovered but that's part of the process. I check everyday to see if there is a new installment of this series -- that's how addicted I am to "Dark Travelers."

I am loving this story more and more can't get enough of it.

My favorite character is Kirik. I love Anya as well though.

I find Kael intriguing, but I wish he'd thaw a bit towards Andi. I feel sorry for her.

Cant wait for the next one! This is exactly like reading a book.

I'll add my congrats on a great story and characters and everthing to the list and just add my hope to see the arrival of another chapter very very soon.

cheers

mjw

LOL The translation at the end was great.

By far the best chapter this far. I loved how you fit the memory in so smoothly of the history of the brothers. It was very intriguing in that it gave alot of insight into their relationship. I am intrigued by Horace's comment about Kael having some magical talent? I think this chapter was really well done and entertaining, moved at a great pace and brought the characters to life more. I love your use of Taters and his cute view of things. I didn't like Kael hitting her in the head, that was the only thing I could object to. Aside from that Bravo!

I dislike the way Kael is treating Andy, without any respect. In order to give this story better points or in this case stars,you have to do better with your characters.

this is a very interesting story and i would love for it to continue. i really enjoyed reading it. i understand the interaction that was going on between the characters is not what some readers would like, but i understand it. kael is not human therefore he will not treat a andi like a human male would. he treats her just like the women from his own race. still though the story is additive. i would like more to come please.

I Love this story! I hadn't checked back for a while after chapter 6, and imagine my delight when I noticed two new chapters. I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter. (BUT with a small one in the house I know how hard it is to get anything done for your own enjoyment.)

Please!!! I can not wait for the next chapter!!! If this was a novel I would have read it in one day! I realize that it is so good because of the time you must put into it, but I can't help it... I am like a fiend!!! Lol,

Oh yes, more hot scenes between Kael and Andi, please!!

as your work is not finished i will withhold any critique or comment concerning its writting, plot, or subject, however i am very intrigued and hope you will continue. I see that you are known for longer delays between chapters and shall wait happy in the knowledge you are taking the time needed to write this the way you want it to be written. Please, do continue this story i am already in love with all the charaters. especialy taters.

SunFiresDancer

My favourite character is Kirik would love to see a hot scene between him and Anya as I think they are a perfect match! Look forward to the next chapter.

willie

WHEN will you put up a new chapter?!?!?! It's been over a month! Please hurry!

I love this story and can't wait for more. I check back at least once a week if not more. I love that you are giving the characters such depth and thought and I can't wait for the next chapter.