All Comments on 'Dark Waters'

by tentaclepentacle

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I love this. If was wonderfully written

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

My 2 cents

5/5 stars. Love the story.

Jjdoesit1Jjdoesit1over 2 years ago

Nicely done, can't wait for the sequel!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I’m normally not a big fan of monster tales but you did this very well.

5*

Tc

PurplefizzPurplefizzover 2 years ago

Nicely done, voicing the fear most people have of the unknown, but curiosity and lust winning out in the end. 5star, thanks for writing and posting, cheers Ppfzz.

maddictmaddictover 2 years ago

How smart. I hope we can experience her first adventure in the pool. You mentioned men were welcome too.

tentaclepentacletentaclepentacleover 2 years agoAuthor

Wow thank you all so much for the kind praise! I'm so glad you enjoyed it! More to come soon, I'm planning on writing both a prequel and sequel. <3

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Love that this story doesn’t have some of the concerning non-consent/mind control that other tentacle stories do! Really would love to see more

DesirableReveriesDesirableReveriesover 2 years ago

I enjoyed your approach to this story very much.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Can we get a sequel? This was a fantastic read both as erotica and as a story. 100% love it!

RubberFuckerRubberFuckerover 1 year ago

Oh wow this was hot! Please please please write more!!!

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Superb, I enjoyed your approach greatly. Hoping to see more in the future.

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