All Comments on 'Darling Nikki'

Great story well executed and never disappointed by this author his stories never disappoint

Well written and has me wanting more

The lyrics are, "I guess you could say she was a sex fiend." Not "friend"

Nikki needs to make Rob a father.

I think there should be another part to this story if not several

Oh, I know that it is “fiend”. Someone at this site edited it.

Verry. Good. Peter.lowe. 561. /surrey/england /. Age. 65

***Thanks for the read.

***Thanks for the read.

PART 2 PLEASE!!!

You had m until the very end with the note. Broke the entire vibe.

Feels very much unfinished. Needs a happy ending and the aftermath fully explored, it seems a mess right now that can ruin their lives

Darling Nikki

Song by Prince

Part 2 please

This is top notch erotic writing. It could do with a part 2 but I’m not complaining. 5 stars and added to my favourites. Now I’m off for an ice cold shower.

After a second reading, and aside from the hot sex, this story is a car crash in the making! I can see it all clearly. When Nikki starts to display her ‘baby bump’ on her visits to the Tate home, Mrs Tate gently asks who the Daddy is, then WW3 is unleashed. Mrs Tate realises that perhaps she shouldn’t have declined Mr Tate’s requests for sex, as all she did was outsource the job to poor little Nikki.

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Dear Mr Frankenstein1962, please don’t leave your readers in suspense. Publish part 2, so that we can watch this train wreck unfold.

Meaty? Sorry but that word doesnt belong in a sex story. Good build up then you killed it with the whole pregnancy threat

I love your stories but while this one was insanely hot and you included a redhead (my favorite), the end seemed like a one off. "Call me when you want to grind". It doesn't fit the story line at all. I hope you can pen another chapter because up until the last few sentences, I was all in.

I haven't gotten past the 1st page and I plan to read the whole thing. I have one negative comment to make although I have liked all of your stories that I have read so far I noticed a faux pas and not the first that I found jarring in my enjoyment of your writing. The word you were looking for was "clique" when you wrote "cliche".