All Comments on 'Date for Boss's Wedding'

From the manner in which you write I very much doubt if English is your first language.

Story is not too bad for your second attempt but it does detract from a good read with the "clunky" phrasing. Hence reduced to 3***.

Suggest you might try using an editor.

Fantastic read.

Great story. Ignore the trolls who want to teach English. Great fuck. Keep writing

Great story well paced , well written as the other person said ignore the grammar trolls , if thy were that good they would give there name and not lurk in the shadows critiquing other peoples work , good or average makes no difference at least you tried and put it out there , please carry on your efforts are appreciated by me and probably thousands more , 5 STARS

I knew i was pregnant as soon as i missed my period. Why did it take you 4months to know?

Even though English doesn't appear to be you primary language it's still a nice story though but an editor would have made it even better.

Cocatastic

Sodatastic

Fantastic story of mother son love. Nothing says I love you more than consummating the relationship with the dutiful son taking his rightful place between his mothers thighs and thrusting his engorged baby maker into his place of birth. As for mom she shows her love by giving her son her body to be his playground and spreading her thighs on her marital bed for her sons pleasure. I loved this story and hope to read more from this talented author.

Average story. AA

Short, emotional, and sweet 5/5!

5.0 = 100% (★★★★★)

"Four months later, I discovered I was pregnant."

That's not how things work for most women.

Really, well we know these are fake but seriously you should do some research into things so you can write something that at least me one think is plausible. I agree, 4 months to find out? That's ridiculous and pathetic! How can anyone comment that this is a great story and mean it...

As the husband isn't in the picture im assuming you are going to allow the son to claim his kid and be a dad too them even in public far too many stories has the son getting his mom pregnant but can't be a dad too the kid he's only allowed to be a brother that's just disrespecting him and saying he doesn't matter not being allowed to claim his kid

Didn't the mother hear about the morning after pill? Of course, if she wanted to purposely get pregnant by her son, then it's a different matter. But 4 months to know that she is pregnant? She is hardly an inexperienced virgin. Anyway the story is nothing extraordinary. I've read a lot of similar stories, some of them far better.

I had an incestuous affair with my younger brother after he came from home from Vietnam. It was at our cousin's wedding. We drove up to Santa Barbra from Los Angeles together. He was planning to stay with a friend there while I booked a room at the local Hilton in Santa Barbra. During a slow dance I felt Tomas' hard cock pressed between my thighs. After the reception began to die down, we said goodbye to our friends and family. While walking to our car I ask him if I wanted to come to my room and smoke some killer weed.

As things happen, we ended up in her bed. God, he looked so handsome standing naked if front of me. Tomas was 6:1. Beautiful warm brown eyes. Broad shoulders. A hard rip stomach. But when I saw what hung between those long strong legs I was in awe! He was semi erect and he looked to be about 9 inches long. But what frighten me most was how thick he was. I was only with 2 men and Tomas was huge compared to them. I knew that once we crossed that line our lives would never go back to us being brother and sister. Crawling between my thick thighs Tomas kissed the inside of her thighs and slowly worked my way up to my sopping wet pussy. I didn't know if it was his handsomeness or if it was that I was about to fuck my beautiful brother, but I brought my A game that night. I was going to fuck him so good that he would not want to leave my side. As he licked and sucked on my sopping wet pussy, I whispered to him:

"I want to suck on your cock Tomas while you eat my pussy."

That only met one thing. He position himself in the 69 position. He on top. I took his big thick cock in my mouth as he licked and ate my sopping wet pussy. He moaned seductively as I sucked on his sweet fat cock.

After about 10 minutes of eating each other out I came hard and long. Flooding his mouth with my sweet nectar. Then I whispered:

"I need you in me Tomas. Please be gentle baby. I haven't been with anyone for a while, and I never had anyone as big as you."

As I Tomas position himself between my legs I took hold of his cock and guided him to my waiting wet pussy. Looking straight into each other's eyes he slowly eases his big cock into his sister's sopping wet pussy.

"Agghhh Tomas, you're sooooooo big. Yeesssssssssssssss baby. Fill my pussy with your horse cock. That's your sister's pussy Tomas. It belongs to you and only you baby. I love you, Tomas. I love you the way a woman loves a man. I'm your woman now. So, fuck me hard and give your woman what she wants. Your beautiful baby. I want your beautiful baby Tomas. Please fuck your baby in me. Please give me your baby Tomas," I moaned into my brother's mouth.

As he came hard in me, he whispered in my mouth:

"Yeah Maria, I'll give you, my baby. You'll be the mother of my children.

That was 50 years ago. Tomas gave me 4 beautiful daughters and 3 beautiful sons. So, it is a very special moment when a woman's man is filling her with his baby batter knowing that he too wants to see his woman's belly get big with his children.

So many mothers plant the idea without being able to follow through. My mother and I teased for three years with " touchings. Finally, lust overcame morals and our love grew beyond the imagination.