All Comments on 'Date Night'

by xnichole_lynnx

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KingCuddleKingCuddlealmost 4 years ago
Bravo!

So much included adeptly in only one page?

And the pace felt natural...smooth!

Very High End writing!

No, that's not a set-up line! :+))

Unless you want it to be? :+)))

More, please!

xnichole_lynnxxnichole_lynnxalmost 4 years agoAuthor
@KingCuddle

Thank you for your comment, I’m glad you enjoyed my story! Hopefully will post another soon!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Holy!! Shit!! Best story yet I’ve read on here!

xnichole_lynnxxnichole_lynnxover 3 years agoAuthor
😊

Thanks Anonymous!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Love how descriptive you are

Fantastic!

mjar65mjar65over 3 years ago
agreed

with all the positive comments - I hope we'll get more

xnichole_lynnxxnichole_lynnxover 3 years agoAuthor
@mjar65

Thanks! Glad everyone likes it. I was writing so much before and then got hit with severe writers block. I had this story started for months before I could continue. Hopefully will write more soon.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Loved this story!

Whew that was hot! Loved this story so much! For sure one of my favorites!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
A Perfect Release...

This encounter is so lusciously and beautifully described, with an intensity born of well-wordedness and undeniable seduction in the writing itself. I love it.

CanadianMCanadianMover 3 years ago

Nice hot encounter.. lots of intimacy.. enjoyed it very much...

xnichole_lynnxxnichole_lynnxabout 3 years agoAuthor

@canadianm thank you!

DessertmanDessertmanover 1 year ago

Lovely passionate love making. The start of a beautiful relationship?

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