All Comments on 'Date Night'

Find an editor. Painful to read.

Not painful at all. Very hot. Part 2?

Quite poorly written. You should have your stories edited by someone proficient in English.

This was not poorly written to me at all, I quite enjoyed it. Good job, keep writing!

Dude, this story has promise but you need to edit it to make sense with proper English grammar. The way you wrote this seemed like you were typing while masturbating and your mind was overwhelmed with lust. The grammar is so bad, I gave up after the first paragraph.

good plot but as others stated, it really needs a clean up as far as grammar goes. I gave up after the first few paragraphs.

I agree, it was painful to read.