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Click hereI walked up to her just as she finished her drink and handed Jim the empty glass. She reached out and took my dick in her hand and began to stroke it. It felt so good, and after all of the stimulation that I have had on this night, there is no chance that I was going to last long. I was right. Just seconds from the point she touched me I could feel my cum welling up inside me. With my eyes closed, reimagining the events of the night, I released my cum with a loud grunt. Jill didn't stop rubbing me as I blew my cum out. She did slow thankfully as I pushed and pushed, jet after jet ejecting out of me. Finally, I was done and she stopped.
As my vision came back I looked down to her. "Here," she said. She handed me her empty glass and said, "take care of that for please." I looked down to find that she had used the glass to collect every drop of my cum. "Bottoms up," she said with an evil grin.
The end.... Or is it?
- COMMENTS
NVDiceGuyover 3 years agoI am shocked this kept my attention. Usually these so poorly depicting the wimp hubby they lose my interest. This was very well done
26thNCabout 4 years agoI thought your story was disgusting, if anything, not erotic. To get a ,mostly, negative comment from Carolina Dreamer, the nicest man in LW,, should be an eye opener for you.
Anonymousabout 4 years agoFirst, you need an editor. There were just too many mistakes. The constant changing from past to present tense was extremely annoying.
Second, the Loving Wives section is mostly read by straight males. Any time you introduce male gay content you're turning off most of the readership. Honestly, despite the numerous mistakes I was somewhat enjoying it until he started sucking cock. At that point I was done.
Thanks for the effort. Next time consider the category and get an editor!!
