All Comments on 'Date Night with Lucy'

I like that they hired Lucy to paint the nursery, would be fun if the couple befriended the other girls.

Anon,

I'm glad you liked that part! I have started thinking about whether they'd interact with the other girls, especially since the stories are roughly set one-per-season so Julia will probably have her baby around the time of the next story.

Another great story. A little lighter on the sensual details than the previous two, but 5/5 regardless.

Note: Redheads are not necessarily more sensitive. Not a criticism: I'm guilty of that myself. Just something I learned while rewatching MythBusters.

TheDeepThinker,

I'm glad you enjoyed the story!

In regards to stereotypes about redheads, I'll bear that in mind. I'm not sure if I was drawing on that stereotype or if I just picked characteristics that happened to align with it, but it's something to be aware of either way. In the Date Night series I've tried to draw a particular distinction between Melissa's body and whoever's body she's borrowing - Julia was stronger, Keiko was quieter, so I figured that maybe Lucy would be more sensitive.

Great chapter, I really love the concept of this story!

RandomToadman22,

Thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying it. I think there may be more chapters down the road in this series but it might take a while.

Wonderful story, hope you write more in this series. Next story's start could involve a woman making fun of the narrator for being fat and pregnant.

Anon,

I'm glad you liked it! I am working on some more stories in this series. I think you've made a good prediction - once Melissa is further along, I think someone might draw her wrath by making fun of her in that way.

Love this series.. please keep them coming..

Anon,

I'm glad you like it! I do plan to continue the series.

Incredibly well written series, I've been following since the first story. It's so rare too to see this kind of 'kink' from the POV of a woman, and the kind that's right down my alley.

Anon,

Thank you! I'm glad you've enjoyed the series. It's nice to know that other people have similar kinks to my own. I hope to write more chapters but I don't know when.