All Comments on 'Dating My Sister'

Good Lord I want the sequel!

WOW!! I want more!

Wonderful story.

Would like you too continue.

Wow, what a hot sexy love story, I loved it .. I am so hot, wet and horny that my dildo may never be the same .. I was thinking of Dawson fucking my brains out as I came hard .. please continue their story if you will 🤗 😘

Is there going to be a part two to this? Hope so

loved it

Please make a sequel

Purrrrrfect!!!!! Very well constructed, full of everything needed to tie the story with a bow and many happy endings to come. Well done!

Really, I loved it. Great build-up & a fantastic ending. I enjoy reading about a brother and sister falling in love. 5+ stars.

Bill S.

What an absolutely wonderful love story!!

Very well done, and with respect and loving dialogue.

Your build up on this was perfect, and the sex descriptions were really delicious.

I see so many warm and positive reviews here....feel proud of yourself for composing something that really means something lovely!

Three soft kisses for Dawson and Raylene's future, together in love. Makes me feel fuzzy inside for them.

5 stars without hesitation!

Sincerely,

B4PW.

p.s. Now go start on chapter 2!

Read this one a bunch of times. Never fails to get me going. It just feels so warm and loving. An innocent date that sparks an inferno of deep love and lust between a brother and sister, culminating in them making love and him taking her virginity (as far as cocks are concerned), and apparently possibly impregnating her. I would love a part 2 with them and Mel, with him knocking them both up and showing some college life and whatever else after.

FINALLY!! A Writer that KNOWS When to Grammatically Correctly End a Paragraph!!

Bravo!!

Beautyfully escalating love story.

I'm just not very fond of the polyamorous outlook at the end.

First, it's nothing I'd engage in or fantasize about.

Secondly, it's beyond my ability to suspend my disbelief. This is not about a casual threesome, the siblings have alredy declared their commitment to each other. Sister plans for the 'love triangle' to become a long or medium term thing. According to the dialog the reason is to get Mel on board with the idea to use her as a 'decoy'. The contrast between the love that hits the siblings like a force of nature and the calculating the sister is engaged in is jarring. What we read in the end is either testament of Raylene informing her brother he would have to fuck her friend without asking the latter. More likely, the two girls already had a talk about this. In both cases Dawson really has no say in the matter. Raylene entices her willing brother to make love to her, telling him he would be the first and only man to ever fuck her and that this will be a long term thing. LATER she tells him about the inclusion of Mel. She was not exactly lying, cause Mel is not a man, to me this still has an aftertaste of scheming and manipulating that devalues the romance we just witnessed.

And I do not believe in polyamorous relationships as a long term constellation. Can it work out if at least one of three participants is submissive and/or (psychologically) masochistic? Might work, I don't know, but it doesn't matter in case of this story. Non of the involved characters shows tendencies in this direction. There is not a snowball's chance in hell our three protagonists stay together. Invevitably sooner or later one of them get's the impression to be the fifth wheel. From than on he or she will interpret almost anything as evidence to be the outsider, to recieve less love. The siblings might drift apart as a result.

I get it, there are a lot of readers who like the outcome of this tale, I just wish for more stories about monogamous relationships, so this comment is not ment to criticise the author, its more about letting the literotica 'community' know: there is a readership for monogamous content too.

Great, but why does there always have to be a possible pregnancy? All the romance and taboo would evaporate and all that would be left is another cheap episode of Teen Mom.

Clever premise.

Nicely told story.

Lacked enough details of the sex.

Needed sex to slow down instead of rushing to orgasms.

Since Ray wasn't normally into boys -- and cocks -- some 'exploration' of his cock and balls could/would have been in order. Some learning what she liked. Some learning what he liked.

Some slow teasing/edging of each other.

Four stars.

AFTER THEY HAD TALKED ABOUT HOW THEY WERE GOING TO LIVE TOGETHER, i HOPED YOU WOULD GO ON AND MOVE THE STORY TO WHERE THE THREE OF THEM WOULD LIVE TOGETHER. BUT NO, YOU RUINED THE WHOLE STORY BY NOT FINISHING IT. I REALLY DO NOT LIKE AUTHORS WHO DO AS YOU DID.

Needs a part two to finish out this story.

Loved it. Very romantic and loving throughout

Good story. I hope for a chapter 2 where Dawson and his sister Raylene move in with mel and maybe Dawson can have 2 women to have sex with and breeds them