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"God yes...cum for me" her voice was hot against his neck.
"Oh shit" he was getting desperate. "I'm not wearing a condom, you threw them away" he was trying to lift her hips up off his now pulsing cock.
"I know" Raylene ground her body down harder, holding him to her body. "Have you ever dreamed of cumming in me?" she asked softly.
"Oh my God Ray, yessss" Dawson moaned as his balls tingled.
"Then do it" she leaned down pressing her firm breasts into his chest. "I want this Dawson" she husked in his ear. "Cum in your date...cum in your lover...cum in your sister" Ray told him.
Ray reached up and wrapped his arms around her back, and then slid his hands down her smooth skin to fill his hands with the firm globes of her ass. With a grunt, he heaved his hips upward and twisted her. With a squeal Raylene landed on her back, Dawson's cock still buried to the hilt inside her.
Pushing up on his knees between her spread thighs, he gripped her ankles and lifted her legs to his shoulders. The silky feel of her nylons drove his crazy as he began to pound into her.
"Oh God yes, fuck me...don't stop...oh shit...so good." Raylene babbled as Dawson hammered into her.
Dawson watched her head roll from side to side as she clawed at the bed sheets. He could feel her tight walls rippling around him as her hips lurched up to meet his; the sound of skin slapping together filling the room.
The smell of their sex filled his nostrils; the sounds of Ray gurgling and whimpering under him in raw pleasure sent tingles down his spine that settled in his balls.
"Oh shit...Ray" Dawson felt his balls tightening. "I'm going...to cum" he moaned between thrusts.
"Do it" Raylene hissed up at him. "Oh fuck fill me Dawson" Ray moaned.
"OOHHH MY GAAWWDDDDDDDDDDDD" Dawson roared.
He jammed his hips down hard, impaling himself in that hot cavern' he looked down at his sister in shock as his cock jerked; the first thick wad pumping deep inside her.
Raylene felt that incredible heat fill her belly, her eyes staring wide up at him. "I love you" she managed to whisper out as her second massive orgasm on the night slammed home.
Dawson gripped her convulsing hips as hot juices splashed across his lower belly. He watched his sisters eyes roll back as her orgasm roared through her, even as his balls spewed a second and then third thick rope into her. He knew she wasn't protected, and he really didn't care at that moment, he wanted to shove every hot drop of cum deep inside her; and all Raylene wanted was that hot cream filling her as she wrapped her arms around his trembling body.
"Holy fuck" Dawson gasped as he tried to catch his breath
"That was incredible" Raylene cooed into his ear.
"God I am in so much trouble" Dawson whispered.
"What's wrong" there was a tremble in Raylene's voice.
Dawson raised his head and stared into her eyes.
"Because I'm in love with my sister" he kissed her softly.
"Then we're both in trouble" her voice whispered back.
"What now?" Dawson looked at his sister.
Raylene swiveled her hips slowly, feeling his still hard cock embedded inside her sopping wet pussy. With a glint in her eye, Raylene shoved her hips upward, causing Dawson to tip sideways. This time it was his sister as the pair rolled over once more until she was seated straddling him, his thick cock deep inside her.
"It's actually rather simple" Raylene gave a smile. "You've been dating Mel" she smiled.
"What?" Dawson was confused. Between her words and the tight pussy that wrapped around his throbbing cock he couldn't focus.
"You didn't say anything because you didn't want me to be upset" Raylene ground her pelvis down into Dawson. "But I think it's fantastic, especially since you plan to move in with her, and I'm going to join you two to help with the finances."
It actually was simple, Dawson thought as his sister began slowly bouncing up and down on him; the hell of it was, it just might work, he thought.
"You think Mel will go for it" he grunted.
"I think she'll come around" Raylene smiled brightly. "Especially after you shove your fat cock into her while I suck her clit" she laughed.
"Oh God" that image burned into Dawson's brain.
"Now, you've got until checkout tomorrow" Raylene growled down at him. "Fuck me Dawson, and don't stop until you've put so much cum into me, it drowns her tomorrow." She husked.
Dawson reached up and gripped his sisters' hips, her words setting off a flame in his balls. With a lunge he lifted his ass straight up, impaling her on his dick.
"FUUCCCKKKKKKK YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS" Raylene screamed at the ceiling, as the pair began to fuck.
- COMMENTS
Anonymous19 days agoGood story. I hope for a chapter 2 where Dawson and his sister Raylene move in with mel and maybe Dawson can have 2 women to have sex with and breeds them
Anonymous2 months agoAFTER THEY HAD TALKED ABOUT HOW THEY WERE GOING TO LIVE TOGETHER, i HOPED YOU WOULD GO ON AND MOVE THE STORY TO WHERE THE THREE OF THEM WOULD LIVE TOGETHER. BUT NO, YOU RUINED THE WHOLE STORY BY NOT FINISHING IT. I REALLY DO NOT LIKE AUTHORS WHO DO AS YOU DID.
Anonymous2 months agoClever premise.
Nicely told story.
Lacked enough details of the sex.
Needed sex to slow down instead of rushing to orgasms.
Since Ray wasn't normally into boys -- and cocks -- some 'exploration' of his cock and balls could/would have been in order. Some learning what she liked. Some learning what he liked.
Some slow teasing/edging of each other.
Four stars.
Anonymous3 months agoGreat, but why does there always have to be a possible pregnancy? All the romance and taboo would evaporate and all that would be left is another cheap episode of Teen Mom.
Anonymous3 months agoBeautyfully escalating love story.
I'm just not very fond of the polyamorous outlook at the end.
First, it's nothing I'd engage in or fantasize about.
Secondly, it's beyond my ability to suspend my disbelief. This is not about a casual threesome, the siblings have alredy declared their commitment to each other. Sister plans for the 'love triangle' to become a long or medium term thing. According to the dialog the reason is to get Mel on board with the idea to use her as a 'decoy'. The contrast between the love that hits the siblings like a force of nature and the calculating the sister is engaged in is jarring. What we read in the end is either testament of Raylene informing her brother he would have to fuck her friend without asking the latter. More likely, the two girls already had a talk about this. In both cases Dawson really has no say in the matter. Raylene entices her willing brother to make love to her, telling him he would be the first and only man to ever fuck her and that this will be a long term thing. LATER she tells him about the inclusion of Mel. She was not exactly lying, cause Mel is not a man, to me this still has an aftertaste of scheming and manipulating that devalues the romance we just witnessed.
And I do not believe in polyamorous relationships as a long term constellation. Can it work out if at least one of three participants is submissive and/or (psychologically) masochistic? Might work, I don't know, but it doesn't matter in case of this story. Non of the involved characters shows tendencies in this direction. There is not a snowball's chance in hell our three protagonists stay together. Invevitably sooner or later one of them get's the impression to be the fifth wheel. From than on he or she will interpret almost anything as evidence to be the outsider, to recieve less love. The siblings might drift apart as a result.
I get it, there are a lot of readers who like the outcome of this tale, I just wish for more stories about monogamous relationships, so this comment is not ment to criticise the author, its more about letting the literotica 'community' know: there is a readership for monogamous content too.
Anonymous5 months agoRead this one a bunch of times. Never fails to get me going. It just feels so warm and loving. An innocent date that sparks an inferno of deep love and lust between a brother and sister, culminating in them making love and him taking her virginity (as far as cocks are concerned), and apparently possibly impregnating her. I would love a part 2 with them and Mel, with him knocking them both up and showing some college life and whatever else after.
Anonymous5 months agoWhat an absolutely wonderful love story!!
Very well done, and with respect and loving dialogue.
Your build up on this was perfect, and the sex descriptions were really delicious.
I see so many warm and positive reviews here....feel proud of yourself for composing something that really means something lovely!
Three soft kisses for Dawson and Raylene's future, together in love. Makes me feel fuzzy inside for them.
5 stars without hesitation!
Sincerely,
B4PW.
p.s. Now go start on chapter 2!
Anonymous5 months agoReally, I loved it. Great build-up & a fantastic ending. I enjoy reading about a brother and sister falling in love. 5+ stars.
Bill S.
