by MagicWand
Personally I think you should have left Juan(ita) alive for a sequel, but I can understand why you didn't. Good story, keep 'em coming.
I would have liked it if you spent more time on how Juanita was forced to dress sexy, finally giving in to it and enjoying tight dresses, lingerie and high heels.
An inspired tale of ultimate revenge for a brutal rape. My only critique is that I would have enjoyed your description of the gang-bang of 'Juanita' by his/her friends.
Glorious revenge!! I think descriptions of the first gangbang and following degredations of 'Juanita' have tremendous potential. Manuel's follow up is unlimited in terms of justifiable abuse and rapacious revenge.
Why not make a sequel with the Doctor cloning a new wife and daugher.
This is one hell of an unusual story. But i liked it a lot!
good going