All Comments on 'Daughter Swap Pool Party Pt. 02'

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Lizzie21Lizzie21over 2 years ago

/me i loved the story the fantasy we all have sometimes :) so wel written thanks

rem556rem556over 2 years ago
John/Jack

Very good story. The only distracting flaw I noticed was the name change, When John became Jack for a few paragraphs or so. 5*

ToughSailorToughSailor8 months ago

Great story. The hot tub scene in chapter 1 was a little bit too accelerated. Also, you missed an opportunity to have Carol DP in this chapter. . .

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Shadowthought is an older man, actor, writer and Pacific NW native that harbors a dark side, a slew of secrets and kinks. His story-telling expertise, listening skills, improv training and imagination make him an exciting RP partner to explore fantasies and desires with. He'...

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