All Comments on 'Daughters and Lovers'

by pmarlowe

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Nice Story

Great short story but got a little too distracted by the amount of times you used ' and ' , instead of using commas.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

It's called "style" and I liked it.

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Down these mean streets a man must go who is not himself mean, who is neither tarnished nor afraid. Which is some fine writing that I didn't do. But I write well enough. And I adore younger women.