All Comments on 'Daughter's BF becomes Father's FB'

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katibkatibover 14 years ago
Believable

Very nicely written. Glad you did not stoop to the common practice of elaborating on all the squishy details. One thing: learn the difference between lie and lay, and complement and compliment.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
WOW

THAT WAS AWESOME. I'm not even kidding. That was probably one of the best stories I've ever read on this site. The wonderful description, the accurate balance of time and tact. The water bill joke made me lol literally. Can't wait for more of this story, post more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
More Please

Love this story -you so have to write more,,,

CoyoteMadeMeDoItCoyoteMadeMeDoItover 12 years ago
i loved it but i missed the details :(

Pleeeeaaaase finish it!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
A Perfet Balance

Wonderful dialogue and timing. I'd like to read more of your work.

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