by sterlingdaydream
Very nicely written. Glad you did not stoop to the common practice of elaborating on all the squishy details. One thing: learn the difference between lie and lay, and complement and compliment.
THAT WAS AWESOME. I'm not even kidding. That was probably one of the best stories I've ever read on this site. The wonderful description, the accurate balance of time and tact. The water bill joke made me lol literally. Can't wait for more of this story, post more!
Wonderful dialogue and timing. I'd like to read more of your work.