All Comments on 'Daughter's Desires'

The transition from fantasy to reality was completely missing. I reread a couple of times but just could figure it out.

Very very hot.

& was pretty much non-existant. This had the makings of a really good story, but the 2nd half was rough & confusing.

The potential for brilliance was wasted, mainly on that transition point. And what became of Jill?

Good story - so nearly more...

Stan

Perhaps she loved her daddy so much that she decided to keep fucking him even through her ovulating period so she could have his baby and several more after that....

This made me so horny I had to finger myself!!! I want a huge cock inside me so much! I want to be fucked so bad I desperate for a man to fuck my pussy!!

Well written; I found the transition to be very artistic and innovative.

Awesome story!!!!

Looking forward to ur nxt stories

Is it me or am I just confused when daddy actually started taking her ??

Agree with other comments that the transition from daughter's fantasy to reality was absent thus the story-line was confusing. There is a second transition missing -- from virgin who's only ever had her "pussy mound rubbed through [her] jeans" to intercourse with her father.

Wow....it's like a whole page or chapter was missing. One minute she's fantasizing and then next daddy's screwing her.

You kind of have to reread that bit, then you get it. She had just had her orgasm, daddy watching no doubt. Then he's behind her, pulling her hair in one hand and shoving his cock up inside her. Happiness ensues ;)

I wish my Daddy would take me while bent over the kitchen table. He has a really nice bulge and I always think of how it must be. Maybe I just need to present myself to him in the kitchen.