All Comments on 'Daughter's First Shave'

Proof read your story before you send it in.

unless you are going to do a few more chapters, you cut the heart of the story into pieces. Is this a one shot deal., will she get pregnant, etc. willDad torn her a sexton?

While some don't like this line of erotica, its really good. But I feel you rushed it a lot. Thanks for the story. Please keep writing.

Childish story, childish writing, totally lacking credibility. I think you are too young to be here.

It's a good story. Just needs spelt checked

Wish it was longer

Wow that is an absolutely amazing story loved it can’t wait to read more of your stories

This was a good story, following my own in many ways. i changed schools and in gym class some of the other girls teased me about me having a thick bush between my legs, i bunked off school gym days until the school contacted dad, he asked me why i bunked off, i told him and asked what i should do, he shaved me but didn't fuck me. i needed shaving every few days and after about two weeks we did fuck and we still fuck three years later

Brain dead people are never sexy