All Comments on 'Daughter's Hot Camping Trip Ch. 02'

You really like the word bowels, don't you? Improve your writing, stop overusing words like that.

I liked the story but I agree that writing could be improved, "shuddered" was used 30+ times!

Fantastic story!

I can’t wait to read more and find out what happens next.

I know this is fantasy, and Daddy Daughter is my favorite story line. it was kinda fun until you got into the anal part. Nothing wrong with anal, but you got hung up using “ anal sheath “ and then added the less than appealing cleanup. It’s like you thought, hmmm, what else can I add in this story and just slung it in. You have done better…

Can’t wait for chapter 3!

Will Nancy be outraged, or will she join in?

Great story you need need to keep going through what happened next

"Barely Legal". C’mon. Either she is legal or isn't?