by ensom
I'm loving this story and the second chapter is even better than the first. I can't wait to read more you are doing a good job at writing this story and hopefully once the sex is not in a dream it will last a little longer even though what I've read so far was really good
The first two chapters certainly have my attention. The mixture of history, mythology, and sex definitely drives the reader onwards. I'm anxious to see where this goes.
This may seem quite secondary to an erotic tale, but your spelling of Odinsen (son of God) is accurate for Norwegians. Being named Andresen (son of man) I know. Well written and mysteriously sexy. I'm enjoying this.