All Comments on 'Daughters Protein Treatment'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Good read and entertaining

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

BTW,

Daughters - plural

Daughter's - possessive

Daughters' - plural possessive

Lee2012Lee2012over 2 years ago

If you’re going to make snarky comments about punctuation, have the testicular fortitude to sign your name, chicken shit people love to troll and point out minor shit, but you STILL read the whole story, right?

5*… awww shit, sorry that’s 5 *. Forgot my fucking spacing. 😎

DunkirkDunkirkover 2 years ago

Daddy needs to fill both daughters pussies with his seed. In a short time both could show off the baby bump he gave them.

SakatoSakatoover 2 years ago

Eine heiße, aufgeilende Geschichte für den Anfang -- Geht es weiter --

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

This breast enlargement technique has bee around for a long time. It might work but even if it doesn't, trying it can be fun

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

( 5 *'s ) I sure hope you write more of this story ......... please don't end it keep writing chapters to it .......

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

HOT STORY!

Makes me wonder if it's really FICTION (as the author claims), but rather NONFICTION.

The richness of detail, the depths of emotions, and the range of activities lead me to think all really did happen.

5 stars to the author, plus bonus stars for the author's daughters - and wife, if she was involved, too

IsabellaEmilyIsabellaEmilyabout 1 year ago

Whoa! Hot! Hot!! HOT!!! FUCKING HOT!!!!!

This is why I love to meet fellow writers in the chat rooms! So glad we bumped into each other, because now I have the rest of your submissions to work through!

Do you check your email if I send you a message through the Literotica link? I would LOVE to stay in touch!

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Like many in the Lit forums I'm older, and my significant other isn't interested in sex any longer. Getting older means things that were taboo when younger now seems... interesting. I have four published series with a few works in progress. The reader is introduced to ...