All Comments on 'Dave & Marla Ch. 01'

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MasterfuljimMasterfuljimabout 9 years ago
Well

An interesting and descriptive start. Nicely written and I'm intrigued as to where this will go

DarkFantasy56DarkFantasy56almost 9 years ago
Great story idea

I enjoyed part one and am looking forward to the next chapter. The story is nicely laid out here so I'll look forward to learning where it leads.

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