All Comments on 'David & 'Lyssa Ch. 05'

This part is up to the rest, keeps gripping you.

Can't wait for the next instalment.

THX

John

As the previous writer said ,very glad to see you at it again. You have added another great chapter to this story and I hope to se many more.

is poor David getting any? or is he too busy? and no tentacle love yet for all 3 wives at once by David in shapeshift?

and why is David KILLING so many enemies, when he has the power to tranform them into lovely coed bikini babes? distract any army.....

Loved this part of the story. I can not wait to read more. I hope to be able to read the next part soon. Please continue with this story line.

I hope theirs mre to come. One of the most fun reads i've had in a long while.

i would like to see were this is going this is great

It was just,"Awesome". No other words. Great storytelling and a good sprinkiing of humor.

I'm looking forward to the next chapter. This is a lot of fun to read!

a truly exceptional breadth of imagination on display.

while i am sad to hear that your brother passed on, i am glad you posted his story to be read i really enjoyed it !!

your brother was a wonderful and creative writer. i'm so sorry for your loss, thank you for sharing his work with the world.

Never in a long time have I ever enjoyed a story so much! Thanks for posting it!

I grieve for your loss! Mae golau llachar wedi mynd allan ac yn y byd yn lle tristach ar gyfer ei basio. (A bright light has gone out and the world is a sadder place for its passing.)

This series can't stop here! It is just crazy enough to be a really fun read! I love the characters and the tempo of the story... Please keep it up for the sake of good entertainment!

I believe the author is no longer with us. His bio says the name of his band is the same as his username. A Google search shows that the founder of Millennium Bard passed away in 2008. RIP

Maybe someone else with good writing abilities can continue the story. Unfortunately, I'm a reader, not a writer. But the story does seem to have much more that needs telling.

To bad he never finished the story.