All Comments on 'David's Tall Girls' School Ch. 24'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Story line consistent

I believe that this had to occur somewhere in your stories. While not really my "thing", it was well written as usual. The old cleaning woman concept was, well, horrid. I only gave you a 75% on this not for writing style or grammar but for my lack of response. To others reading this story that enjoy this the story dealt well and did good "service" to this fetish.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Wonderful!

Love this story so much. Your writing makes everything so vivid and real. An absolute joy to read. Thank you!

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