All Comments on 'Dawn'

So, was he what I think? Has her 'life' just changed, completely, for ever? Great little tale!

Lukas

Loved the story!!! Was he a Vampire(Creature of the Darkness)?? Is there going to be more to this one in the near future? Please continue to write, you do seem to have a talent for it!!

Left me wanting additional Chapters. Please continue this story if possible. Well written!!!

Very nice indeed! I loved it. Extremely well written!!

I Liked This Story. It Had Feeling And You Always Described The Feelings And Emotions! Excellent!

Definitely write a series. This was great, tension was fantastic. Who is the beautiful man?

It was awesome... It reminded me about Twilight though in a sence..