All Comments on 'Dawn: A Tale of Submission Ch. 04'

A fun story and a good look at the M/s relationship. There are so many ways to go from here and I certainly look forward to seeing your direction. I have certainly seen a great environment for kids within these relationships and the introduction of new characters is one of the things that makes this interesting. Look forward to more.

I really like this story. It expresses much of the feeling that I want from a Master/slave relationship without devolving to pure porn. The characters feel right and the plot is realistic enough to be true, even if the characters are uniquely kinky.

I want to live this story out, and that is high praise.

Well done!

I for one am happy at the turn this story has taken I find too few bdsm stories show how to balance this life-stile with family.

I have no words I came to almost crying when she was said to be pregnant. Master truly wanted her and his child which made my eyes water with joy. I cant have enough oh... Please keep them cumming LOL. I want more...need more... This series couldnt be any more perfect. Love cant even explain it. I cherish ,adore this story. Ohhh... I cant wait for the next one... ;-) Great Story...

Can you please update. I love this story so much and know nothing about this life but the way you put it out there is sexy as HELL. Please update soon