All Comments on 'Dawn In The Dark Ch. 03'

And there are always unexpected delights just around the next corner.

Once again, though, you've left us hanging on the edge of a cliff and waiting for the next chapter isn't going to be easy. Excellent writing!

Okay, well so far so good, a healthy imagination is always a good thing when thinking up a story. And so far this couple appear to be on the same page, having fun with their fantasies. I am curious to know why you have the husband pushing this 'sharing' fantasy,and the wife seems to be going along with it. Maybe somewhere down the line the husband can imagine a hollywood starlette making love to him. Anyway on to the next chapter.

You are an excellent writer; your turn of phrase and story progression is first rate. I simply loved the first few paragraphs of the first chapter where you talked about the older sister who was up at ungodly hours slamming drawers and singing some happy song. The other thing I like about your stories is they seem real and don't become just a fantasy. It is easy to imagine Dawn and Harry as next door neighbors, people you like to talk to, who are obviously happy with each other and their world. In fact you have done such a good job of writing Dawn, that I wish she was my wife, LOL.

Canot wait for next chapter!

to do something for me. I need you to get on your computer, or grab a pad of paper and write. I need to write quickly and concisely but I need the next chapter. Not tomorrow but right now. You are killing me with suspense. Please put me out of my misery. I gave this *****.

I hear and I obey, Oh mighty one! The final chapter has just been submitted and awaits approval.

I hope I haven't rushed it too much because this means a lot to me - as I hope you'll all understand if/when you read it.

It seems that I am just like everyone else, waiting for the next chapter. Excellent.

If I will still be pleased and happy after the next chapter! You write extremely well but I am afraid that you will cuckold the poor guy!

an unexpected turn of events.

Your writing is masterful once again. This is a terrific story.