All Comments on 'Dawn of Pleasure'

Always nice when real life surpasses our online 'couplings'. A very well thought out and written story though some proofreading would be beneficial. I definitely look forward to reading more of your work. As this is my first foray into your writing and the first story you posted here I have added you to my favorites list. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.