by SirSinn
I miss reading this kind of stories. The new ones are short and not even good. I'm happy I found this one will be reading more of your stories for sure 5 fucking stars.
A very hot story. 5 stars. Just one issue but very important. Though anal sex is very erotic, ass-to-mouth is an absolute no-no. There are many harmful bacteria in the anal canal apart from fecal matter. It is not only unhygienic, it is also dangerous. The porn stars that we see doing this take a lot of precaution even though the average public may not know this. Whenever they have a shoot involving ass-to-mouth ( even in case of just anal sex), they clean themselves with saline douche BEFORE the shoot. Even then the act is not totally hygienic because some bacteria do remain. So though the act may appear erotic, it NOT recommended. And you, being a author with quite a following, should know better than to include such actions in your stories. This because many of your readers may not know the consequences of such sex. And though they understand that the story is a fantasy, they may try to copy the fantasy into real life. It is not only you, I have come across other authors too with this type of sex in their stories. Hence this detailed explanation. Sorry.
This is my second or third reading of this incredible story, and it's still one of my favorites! I would give it 10 stars if I could!
That was so fucking HOT!!! Loved the writing, story, the super hot sex. Everything!!! Love the incest aspect and thought it was paced well. I'm a HUGE fan of anal, and loved that you both added it and saved it for last. Great build up.
I loved the story, it`s very simple stroke story included very good seduction , teasing , and dirty talk was very important at any sex scene. IMO only two thing were weak, the first this kind of story (incest) need more slow burn but this story is went direct to the point so there is no enough sexual tension that makes the sex scenes more hotter, and secondly the repetitive sex scenes (maybe two long/solid sex scenes are better than the repetitive titty-fuck scenes and it would make the story more shorter and sexier).
anyway that is my opinion, though in all cases I loved it.
I loved the story, it`s very simple stroke story included very good seduction , teasing , and dirty talk was very important at any sex scene. IMO only two thing were weak, the first this kind of story (incest) need more slow burn but this story is went direct to the point so there is no enough sexual tension that makes the sex scenes more hotter, and secondly the repetitive sex scenes (maybe two long/solid sex scenes are better than the repetitive titty-fuck scenes and it would make the story more shorter and sexier).
anyway that is my opinion, though in all cases I loved it.
I loved this story. I too used to hear my parents having sex,but never got the chance to bang my mom. She has big beautiful tits. This story has me ready for a good round of sex
The most incredible hot fucking ever. Great writing, excellent story telling. Exactly the kind of hot fucking demonstrated in arousing story like setting.
The hottest content of any story I've read. This is a great 7 part setting for the hottest teasing, fucking and sharing that even great fuck flicks can't match. You tell a great tale and have over loaded my imagination. I have always believed that a woman has so many spots to pleasure each giving her the most incredible orgasms time after time. Now that's how to make a woman feel.
I loved this story, and I liked it because the son wasn't a jerk and getting all dominant to his mom and aunt. The love they had for each other was beautiful. Oh, and the sex was hot as fuck. :)
Five stars.
To all readers who leave negative comments: why don't you fuck off and go read another story if you don't like what you're reading? The story is clearly tagged with its subject matter, but apparently you don't have enough grey matter to figure that out. These authors do this for their own enjoyment and their stories are a gift to us, the readers. To paraphrase my mother, "If you can't say anything nice, keep your mouth shut and piss off."
should have been only a weekend in 3 pages and the anal left out. Just ok. 3*
Sick of anal in these stories. It's guys feelin their feminine side...GAY
Sure, because every man who has anal sex with a woman just has to be gay, right?
That's like saying every man who eats pizza has to be Italian.
Dumbass.
This story is very similar to a one-on-one with a friend who has huge natural tits AND loves anal. Dy-no-mite!!!
the build up is enticing and it's an arousing ride until the end! thank you!
As a porn story, it moves along great. Love the tits, the interplay with mom, bringing aunt in, and of course the lingerie.
I agree with 2nd last anon. Unfortunately, like a lot of MF porn, mom is left getting pleasure from pleasuring the dick. It's why I've moved toward girl on girl porn cuz there's a lot of emphasis on the pussy.
Loved this story but there was one thing missing, Zak eating pussy. I don't know about anyone else but I can't fuck until I taste that pussy. Maybe it's just me but I crave the taste of a nice juicy pussy and just can't get into sex without it.
Excellent story. Erotic and sexy. Loved the build-up which makes it more believeable. The physical description of mom really helped. Thanks for the read.
-bern1965(pending).
The little side stories between sexcapades made it more believable. Well written and the different upswing in sex, each following day, was a nice twist. Keep up the good work. I hope there is more to cum.
Loved it. Didn't just jump into hot sex but when it did it was very good. Always a fan of the big facial on mom!
Expletive above to be uttered in a low, breathless Irish accent. Superb.
You should make this into a little series with Zak, his mom and his aunt. Well done on this. :)
love ain't sex dumb ass! Good wank story. He should knock the filthy whores up! LOL!!!
A great story. My stress levels went on a roller coaster ride. I loved it. I hope to see more stories like this.
What an amazing story. Great fodder for some sexy activitirs. I hope you will soon have more to offer. I can always use the release of stress. I think i got released several time while reading it. Thanks again!
This will be perfect for several loads over the next few days. Well done!
These trysts between the mom, son, and Aunt Laura had me stroking my now MAN COCK through each of the seven chaptrers of this very HOT family incest. I blew my cum load during each chapter; recalling my "doing it" with my own Dad and his younger sister, Connie. Dad called "Cuntie" and I called her Aunt Cuntie. I loved your Day By Day Story and I want to let you know that YOU made me shoot my load seven times. BTW, I was so hot that I did it while my adult son was sleeping on the couch in the same room. I could NOT hold off. Could you add another chapter with Rob, the boss, making it a Bisexual foursome? Thanks for my four volcanic orgasms.
man I enjoyed the story so much I coundn't stop reading it to the end, I was so turned on that I even blew my load in my pants from this erotic story, keep writing more of this type of story.
Thanks for all the kind words -- this might be my own favourite from my stories so I'm glad others like it.
I'm honestly torn between this and "An Unconventional Relationship" by another author.
I have to say this story is probably my favorite, but I wish it had more of an introduction before the sexual stuff began. This way I could feel a bit more attachment to the "Mom".
Thanks for the post! I hope you end up writing more stories similar to this one. I love the day by day build up and the mother/son.
Threesomes are great if everyone is full in. This story is very good but could be better if both mom and Aunt Laura got pregnant.
I was involved in some threesome in my early years with my mom and Mary Jane.
Over the years my mom and I had four children and Mary Jane and I had three children ( a set of twins and a girl).
My nephew and I read this one together. I rode him slow while the build up was going on. When the story got to the Butt fucking he stuffed my ass full Ahhh fuck yes it was soooo good. Came in me so deep. Ready fore more
TBC
One of the best stories I've read here so far. Nice to have his Aunt join in on the fun. So fucking hot!
twice while reading your story. It was a bit long for me, but I couldn't stop reading. Very well done. Whew, I need to rest now.
Please continue...... I want to read about her pregnant and some more.
like it so much! Thanks...
Just about everyone seems to have enjoyed this story so thank you to everyone who's taken a moment to vote and/or leave a comment.
wow. i am speechless. That was by far THE best story in awhile, u deserve all time. Ive been on this site for over 6 years and ive never made a comment and never liked but yur story was holy crap amazing. Please keep it up.
I came 4 times from this story. The first time was massive so I waited an hour or two so I could refuel. Then I read again and came. But I kept reading. It got hard within five minutes so I came again. Then at around the start if the anal, I grew hard again. I jerked off and when I came I was nearly empty. You sir or madam. Are very talented but you couldve split it into parts. Im not hating or being rude. But its nice to leave the reader wanting more. Keep in mind I will definitely be reading this again. You have officially been added to my list of amazing stories and artists. Goodnight
This was an amazing story, I hope you plan on continuing it......SO fUCKING HOT!!!!!!
for the moments that were opportunities with my Mom that I missed out on!
Like how you didn't jump into the sex but worked your way in to it.
Best story I have read by far.
Loved the build up. Not really into incest, but gave it a shot. Loved the tit fucking!
Parts of this hot story could have been taken right out of my past with my own Mom. Totally enjoyed it and the memories it stirred .
Super hot story had me so fuckin hard.look forward to reading more of your work.
Great stuff as I've come to expect from you. How about a story (or stories) that focuses on the goings on at Jay's Sweet Things?
I masturbated and cum 3 times whilst reading it got me so hot and horny you should definately keep writing aslong as theyre as hot as this, thank you for the best masterbating session of my life so far
this story was incredible. I never ever review or rate, but made an exception to comment midwank. This was extremely erotic and made me very hard and horny. Great Job!! Really needs a follow up tho.
Great story! I enjoyed it, how about next week?
Zak should get them both pregnant
Loved the way it was laid out and want more details in the next part. Want to know more about Aunt Laura ! What did she in sacs father and did d
Denise begin this with her sister after there lesbian experiences. Thanks from P house forum
Loved the slow build up, and the way the story unfolded really nicely done.
I beat off 4 times to this and shot all over myself..... loved it imagining those two hot women licking it off and sucking my cock clean
Simply AWESOME. Loved it all ..... Good pace and build up, LOVED the titfucks (some of the hottest dialogue ever written is simply "fuck mommy's tits", grrrr). Liked it when she called him a motherfucker. Simply a hot nasty story.
Bravo.
Don't usually read incest stories, but I'm glad I read this. Lovely paced story and incredibly horny. Thanks very much.
More chapterso with threesome and nephew with aunt please!!!!!
i dont usually read the longer stories but this kept me gripped in more ways than one hope theres another chapter
yes, very well written and is so hot and arousing :) We need another chapter where Zak gets tutoring from his Mom and Aunt daily. They also have a yound babe from Zak's new job, who is small, big boobs and really likes cum; to learn how to handle him too. Thank you !!
I enjoyed the way you started the seduction and allowed it to build slowly, with a little more progression at each encounter.
I know you planned this as a one-shot, but there are so many directions this could go.
I would like to see a romance develop between Denise and Rob! Or maybe Rob, Denise and Laura. Rob seems like a strong, kind, decent man. Then, I would love for Rob to try to set up Zak with his virgin teen daughter, or daughters! (I would have the daughters be very different body types from Denise and Laura, maybe very petite gymnasts.) You can save the mass, family orgy for Chapter 3.
This was an awesome story. I thoroughly enjoyed the entire plot line. I didn't mind the repetitiveness. I think you definitely could have a few more entries of this story. Hope to see it soon. :)
I would get it 7 stars if I could, one for every chapter. Great story, very well written. Looking forward to more stories.
Another title for this story could also be seven days if seduction, but I liked it despite the length. I hope you continue your other stories down the road
This story should be at the most half as long. It is far too repetitive. Ultimately, the entire story becomes boring and not worth the bother. If you could weave a story line within the context of a real essay, it would read much better. In this case, there is no story: just a horny, voluptuous mom, her equally horny sister/lover, and her well endowed, always horny son. Since you tipped your hand early, and sexual contact followed quickly, everything else was just dragged out.
You seemed to write as if you were being paid by the word. 3 stars is a fair grade. You can do better.
One of the best stories I have read on here in a long time, Thanks for sharing with us.
7 pages is the longest single story I've done -- I normally stick to two or three so thank you for reading it despite the length.
Those of you who asked for a part 2, sorry, this is a self contained story -- no sequel coming I'm afraid!
Not sure what I'm going to be doing next but again thank you for the views, the votes and the comments. Check out my blog (address in my profile page) for news.
Really liked this longer and slower set up style. Looking forward to the next one.
Like a couple of the others commented, 7 pages was almost a deal breaker, however since I found it to be such an interesting thought out storyline, not to mention the fact it is damn fine writing, I couldn't stop reading it!!!
Thank you for all the thought and time you put into this story. I haven't favored a lot of stories on here, but this one...damn!!
Should you make this multiple chapters? I don't know, but I will most certainly look for more from you!
Happy New Year, SirSinn.