All Comments on 'Day of Injustice'

Hey people, if you got to the end then thanks for reading, hope you enjoyed it. Feedback and constructive criticism is appreciated either in the comments, or via private feedback totally your choice. If you're here because you read Chasing Paradise then don't worry, I will be getting back to it sooner rather than later!

Good story. Maybe slow down a little and add detail. Liked it alot...

Great story. Would be interesting if you ever continued it.

Thanks Anon, glad you enjoyed it. It could have been expanded more but this was already almost double its original length, and I just needed to get the story out of my head.

Thanks also Fibroidkey. It's unlikely this will ever get a direct followup, but there are plants for things that I can use later if I want. You never know, a flight of fancy might take me and bring me right back here.