All Comments on 'Days of Chrissie Past'

by Cromagnonman

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wapentakewapentakeabout 1 year ago

Another entertaining and well written story. 5 stars.

Boyd PercyBoyd Percyabout 1 year ago

Good story! He made the better choice in the girl he married. I did learn a new word: theodolite.

5

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

A little too repetitive on tides and 100 year events. And it's kind of strange for the title character to be long dead and have no relevance to moving the story along.

muskyboymuskyboyabout 1 year ago

Who was the romance supposed to be with? No likeable characters.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

The writing was rather primitive. Events just jumped into being and there was very little if character development.

Diecast1Diecast1about 1 year ago

Like the story a lot. AAAA+++

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I'm a pretty normal average male, chronologically well over 18 but psychologically I'm not so sure. I have been writing as a hobby for many years and now that I have time on my hands I am looking to become more professional at it. I enjoy reading, morning walks along the river...