by LindsayMurray
Love the detail and the different point of view, you are an exquisite writer.
I like your pacing. You're in complete control, and we're just along for the ride. But it's a sexy ride, so... lead on!
~B
Deliciously hot and softcore. Love the mystery and the friends gravitating. Good quality writing too.
You are delivering a great story. Your descriptions and thoughtful creation of scenes and interactions are wonderful. The talented Ms. Megan is really, really, adept with her teeth and mouth. This man has quite the catch on his hands. As far as Rueben goes that must have been one heck of a car crash to prompt perpetual abstinence and abruptly give up this fine young lady.
Looking forward to my reading the remaining chapters