All Comments on 'Daytime Distractions'

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MigbirdMigbird9 months ago

Nice structure — trying to find a missing database while not wanting to miss a fun lunch break. And maybe it was the back/forth that made this erotic vignette/fragment less charged than earlier pieces or maybe the sex less intense (?) Like the anonymity as you work off Sapho fragments — original entertainment. Few missed edits but not distracting.

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