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Anonymousalmost 7 years agoEnglish
You really should study/learn it. Your constant use of incorrect words, your use of incorrect forms of words, your grammar, etc. just seems to grow worse. Why do you seem to think it is a weakness to have someone proof this crap?
Anonymousalmost 7 years agoI think it's great, could only be better with longer chapters. Hope to be able to read the next chapter soon.
Anonymousover 6 years agoboring
I got as far as Chapter 3 and stopped reading (and I skimmed thru most of Ch 2)
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