by Otazel
A very well written original and humourous story. Some nice dialogue and engaging characters along with a fast paced narrative and a snappy ending makes for a good read. Recommended.
This was wonderfully original, & very witty. A pleasure to read, I've never run into anything quite like it. (You might want to proofread again, as several typos were the only things to mar my enjoyment while reading! :) Many thanks for a memorable story.
Very witty and unique. I've never read a story like it before. If there were any typos, I didn't notice them -- I was too intrigued with the storyline! This story is definitely going down in one of my favorites. Thanks for sharing!!
-xoxo, LilyA
Good stuff, I was going to quibble, but I was having too much fun. Very much enjoyed this.
finally had time to read this and damn it was funny. you can't fight the inevitable hahahaha
Well, think about it.
For an Eskimo, an Arctic coastline would be heaven, a tropical island would be hell.
For a Melanesian, a tropical island would be paradise and a Arctic coastline would be hell.
For any one of our onepercenter overlords, Heaven would be Hell and Hell would be Paradise. Imagine trying to thread any of those bloated ego's through the eye of a needle!
Excellent! Imaginative, well-written and engaging. Lots of nice little titbits thrown in and a good twist at the end, like in several of his other stories.
I don’t know whether Ozatel is a professional mainstream writer, but he should be.