All Comments on 'Dealing with Jessie Pt. 07'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Dear God in Heaven

Saint Gary to the rescue! Is he the ONLY one that has to suffer just so Jessie can get better? Jessie's parents just seem to get of scot-free for perpetuating the sickness in their daughter, and whoever is the real father of Jessie's unborn child got a free fuck and no repercussions.

I understand the marriage contract states "in sickness and in health, for better or for worse" and all that, but doesn't the same contract also stress fidelity? But I guess Saint Gary doesn't care about any of that...

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

Load of HORSE SHIT! Convoluted garbage and typical psychiatrist blaming everyone but the PATIENT, lost this reader.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Thank you

Thank you!

I love this story, this episode is better written than some before.

Continue please and... like yesterday I love happy ending

penneydog55penneydog55over 4 years ago
Wowee!

So Far So Good!....I know that this is fiction but I hope that She comes good and either Gary or Jessie kicks that company Jessie works for Where it hurts!....The Hip Pocket!....Thanks for sharing this Brilliant story with us! 5 Stars ★ ★ ★ ★ ★ WOOF!

Huedogg2Huedogg2over 4 years ago
So you’ll give away everything for your piece of mind

But you’ll stay the wife that treats you like a piece of shit because some sense of loyalty to a woman with the morals of an alley cat. For some idea of keeping a cuckold commitment. All I can say is WOW

cordialddcordialddover 4 years ago
...listening to you drag your fingernails over the chalkboard. ..

Not fun.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Don't

Know when to quit, do you? Just more crap.

payenbrantpayenbrantover 4 years ago
You are showing a great example....

Of people who need to be rendered sterile. This form of insanity needs to be nipped in the bud. And Gary should be recording all of this to be used in his divorce case.

hotprof1973hotprof1973over 4 years ago
Hope the doctor is wrong

There is a disorder which explains all her behaviors, which isn’t what he suggested -and her meds might be wrong if I am right. Even if I am wrong, I am still enjoying where this is heading. Well done.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Just too long

There is a basic story here. The wife has had a breakdown and treats the husband like shit. No need to drag this out. She either recovers with his help, sues the company for sexual harassment or he does what he should have 4 chapters ago. Divorce her and marry the schoolteacher.

Despite my comments this is well written so 4 stars.

OPrimeOPrimeover 4 years ago
Well?

Is this crap ever coming to an end? She needs to be hospitalized.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

So... she’s crazy.

Glad we cleared that up.

But he’s ridiculously passive.

He can get her help but shouldn’t be expected to tolerate this garbage.

He’s willingly part of her sickness.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

Wow perfect example of sexual harassment. Take the firm to court for fifty mill and get the hell out of town. He has to go because she will cheat again.

rnebularrnebularover 4 years ago
So sad that the BTBers only see one thing

I'm really enjoying this trip. It's slow, to be sure, but the exploration of an actual reason why a loving wife might cheat, is quite a ride. Mental illnesses are serious, and are devastating to any relationship. I know from firsthand experience...

He isn't a wimp. If he was, he'd be sitting in a chair watching her with some smarmy asshat like Snyder in bed. He loves her, plain and simple. Even if she's a total bitch to him, he still wants her to get better. I think their marriage could still come to an end, but it really depends on Jessie letting him back in 100%.

Thanks Jedd and keep em coming. For all the rage haters, wish you could see this story for what it truly is.

Rnebular

GrimmerGrimmerover 4 years ago
Confusing

Milquetoast was a good term.

Him needing to be Jesus another good term.

Having difficulty dealing with the passivity as I read this. It has potential but I feel like I'm mud slogging.

ribnitinribnitinover 4 years ago
whining and bitching

Amazing all the people who are bitching about this story,but keep reading it. Life must be so dull for them. I read every installment as soon as it comes out because I think it's a terrific story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
R nebular..

S-o if i dont agree to him being a wimp and a dormat all în the name of Love sacrifice and with the power of Friendship i-am a btb? Actually when a reconciliation is Done tastfully and with motive and PURPOSE not just a raac for the sake of raac. You or the author if you Can be So kind, explică how is It Possible for any Man with not doormat tendecies Castilia be There... Even then în real world maybe the Snyder sex would have been forgiven.. But the knife ready to strike at his chest? Hell no.. That is a perfect example of the need to Get away.. Running not walking. Most of the authors Here dealling în raac are using mental Sickness aș an Excuse for everything. But they Loose focus on his or her partner state during. I can understand some mental Problems but this is al ready gone to Violence.. The thing is all you raac types are gushing and Raving after how saint George Acts how Manly and this is how it Should be... But and this is a big BUT... If this would have Happened to any of You.. If most of You would have run at the cheating on you moment.. The rest would have puț her în jaill and forget the key at the knife moment. Plus how a mature adult act aș Dumb aș him? How the Hel you asking Advice to children? Who never been în a situation like This and cant take the situation în whitout being involved emotionally? I Am not from USA. I Am from Balkans. Here women are Still women.. And men are men.. I Am Glad for that. I see s-o Many videos and stories of how women în ușa are entitled spoiled and Bossy and how men are just there to serve.. And speak when asked only.. Anyway I digress.. Sorry about that. În my opinion carvohi WRITING has gone stale and now he is copy/Paste from Matt Morreau în order țo invoce a reaction.. I dont deamean his work WRITING is Not easy.. Just his rezults.. Also fuck auto corect on My phone

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Yadda, yadda

1*

Boring!

BuckeyebobBuckeyebobover 4 years ago
Very good again.

I’m enjoying this very much. You have a lot of shortsighted, impatient, opinionated fans. This story is like watching a slow motion train wreck. Very well written and thought out.

cybojicybojiover 4 years ago
Labotomy

Yup, bitch needs a labotomy. 4

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Too long

Sorry but I don't see this as a nine chapter story. The whole thing could have been covered in one maybe two.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Sorry, not well written, not entertaining....

Not interesting. 7 pages of the same crap over and over but nothing happens. Doesn't anyone remember what a slut she is? Marriage not worth saving and she is the corporate whore! She isn't worth all the trouble, neither is this crappy story. I kept reading because I usually love carvohi stories, I'm done with this drivel now.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
"He isn't a wimp"

rnebular sounds like a flat earther defending the husband's strength at this point.

KRD19254KRD19254over 4 years ago

I saw the pregnancy coming and now I see the other female lawyer documenting a 'hostile-work-environment' and what it's done to Jessy. Jessy being with child just ads to the case and then being emotionally and professionally minimized by the firm will just further this case.

I do not see any benefit to Jessy enduring all this workplace harassment but I see it as pushing her towards a total mental meltdown forcing her into becoming institutionalized for some period killing her law profession and further devastate her family.

What is missing is the cause-n-affect Jessy's mental state is having upon her three daughters. Can Gary keep his daughters safe and clear inside that hostile home environment - I think not.

Then at her age the complications of having a baby, being on some drugs, drinking, poor nutrition, and her emotional state --- what affects will that have on a developing baby - best hope is for a miscarriage as Jessie's temperament/bi-poler-OCD has her ill equipped to handle any adverse baby health issues.

My fondest hope is the baby is perfect that turns Jessy into a nurturing adjusted mother; the female partners win the multi-million harassment suite allowing both to retire in comfort on their terms. But life often sucks and fairy-tales don't happen.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Well

this is obviously heading to a RAAC. The tired counselor/psychiatrist trope is annoying.

ibbunkibbunkover 4 years ago

While I appreciate your time and effort you've put into your work, I feel like I'm being used. Part of my brain is telling me that there's 2 chapters of material here, with no ending, that's being s-t-r-e-t-c-h-e-d out for as long as possible, until your readers realized they're being conned. Too long for such little headway. Best wishes.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Rabbit Hole

All of a sudden it is getting deeper and deeper.

I hope you solve this problem for Jessie, Gary and most importantly , for the children.

T.T.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Nice going.

Rarely someone has written on mental illness. And when divorce is not an option. How about adding narsicist personality disorder and smaller age kids.

ribnitinribnitinover 4 years ago
developing nicely

Great stories. Short on clichés, though.

ForensicFossilForensicFossilover 4 years ago
Too, Too Long

I have enjoyed many, but by no means all, of corvohi's stories. This one is, I think, his worst. He set himself a difficult, perhaps impossible, task with the very, very hard to like or respect main characters.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Neck of the Funnel

Ya know all that fucked up mess of story and characters and events that was going no where? It is all approaching the neck of the funnel. We'll see what, if anything, makes it through. Given carvohi's talent, I see a good denouement, where the major strings of this tangled mess become clear.

Jessie is strange. And certainly suffering from an illness. But Gary is the real mystery character. The poor dumb ass can't even get his dog to obey him. So, he does what Gary has always done: packs up his gear and goes home. Silently, quietly, seemingly with no rancor. He almost has a Forrest Gump quality about him. As if, after one of Jessie's tirades, he just thinks/says, "I gotta go pee".

I'm still trying to reconcile the wimp/wuss Gary with the one that now sets improbable boundaries with Jessie. He tells his D to tell Jessie that he expects her to pick him up at dunkin'. He waits 4 hours so he can then say 'you ran away'.

26thNC26thNCover 4 years ago
Ribnitin

I'm with ribnitin. I'm enjoying every chapter of your story. I can't even begin to think I understand Jessie but I can see Gary's position very well. He.wants to help fix her,.but is.conflicted about whether he can stay married. Two chapters to go and I wish there were more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Compass

The damn compass is windmilling -- there's clues somewhere in the story and I just can't find them - still kinda feel mother & childhood have screwed her mind -- somehow!

19pvc44

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
When the fuck...

When the fuck are you going to quit insulting our intelligence with this boring shit?

StangStar06 or Just Plain Bob could have written this story with one third of the verbosity you have shown and it would have also had a much needed touch of humor to it.

dragonmann72dragonmann72over 4 years ago
Jedd could you explain to me...

in chapter two you wrote, He'd lost Daisy, she was still alive, but nowhere near him so he acquired another lab through animal rescue; he hoped he'd be able to get it ready for hunting in the fall.

In this chapter you wrote, He bribed Daisy with some left over steak, and together they took off for the state park where he kept the pram, he had an electric motor for it.

What happened to the other dog?

tazz317tazz317over 4 years ago
THIS TALE GETS BETTER AS TIME ELAPSES

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LownslowLownslowover 4 years ago

I can tell you from first-hand experience mental illness in a spouse is one hard row to hoe. The story does seem to be a little long-winded but I do understand that sometimes you have to build a characters background. just hope they find the peace that they need whether it's together or separate. I give it about a four out of five.

Schwanze1Schwanze1over 4 years ago
She’s all that

And he’s responsible for helping her perpetuate her fucked use genes

Schwanze1Schwanze1over 4 years ago
Apparently need an editor for my comments

Fucked up genes

silentsoundsilentsoundover 4 years ago
Cock sucking corporate whore

Just be patient as she sucks and fucks her partners.

Gary needs to start attending cuckohilics anonymous.

toolkeepertoolkeeperover 4 years ago

What a polarized set of comments. I’d ignore the insulting Anon idiots and take to heart the group that thinks the story is too long and those on the edge of their seats.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Really great story

I love a good story and you're spinning one here. It's too bad about the guys who just want to read about revenge and recovery. You've given us a complex situation populated with complex people. This may become the best or your contributions, though you've provided lots of good ones. I am looking forward to the final chapters.

oldbearswitcholdbearswitchover 4 years ago
Good segment, waited all day to read it. Still tool long and too RAAC to be perfect for me, but his reasons why he stays and keeps trying are covered pretty well

All in all, she doesn't deserve him. She deserves on of the weasely little cucky boys in today's plethora of crappy cuck stories.

Maybe the wimp maggot professor married to the psycho bitch cuck slut? Perfect hubby for her.

NVDiceGuyNVDiceGuyover 4 years ago
Keeping the interest

It is a bit long but I appreciate breaking it into parts rather than some of your previous 30 page jobs lol jk

MarkT63MarkT63about 4 years ago
No reason

Is there really ever a reason the be a cheating slutty wife??? I know you're giving Jessie the mental illness excuse, but I don't buy it. Just my opinion...

TorgauTorgaualmost 4 years ago

Even if she "loves" hubby, she demeans him at every opportunity, mostly because he continues to put up with her crap. He should have spanked her sorry ass a long time ago.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
What Kind Of Fucking Idiot

Goes to his whore of a wife's pseudo doctor without making sure the whore wife has given the 'doctor' permission in writing waiving the Hippa protections? He's there to meet the 'doctor' and discuss his whore wife's condition and the 'doctor' can't give him the details? So all he gets is mumbo jumbo, talk around the issues but don't get any clear idea of the true situation. Fuck that, just get up, call a cab, pack up the girls and leave.

"He felt sorry about what he knew she was going through. He knew she didn't deserve it, but he was just a milquetoasts anyway so it didn't matter. What does someone do when they have to watch someone they once loved slowly self-destruct?" First of all what do you mean she didn't deserve what was happening to her? Who else deserved it then, other than Dumbass? Second of all "What does someone else do...?" Ugly is to the bone, you can teach to correct ignorance sometimes, you can't fix stupid and you can't fix someone else. Do not go directly to jail, run as fast and as far as you can.

One question that I may have missed the answer to; when he bought his own home that he stupidly turned around and sold he went out a got another Lab. What happened to that dog? Signed: BTW

danoctoberdanoctoberover 3 years ago
Let roll baby, roll...

...all night long.

What makes this a great story is the mental health issues this woman is dealt are being treated with a certain balance of dignity.

It sets a certain tone that makes this story work.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
I’m done. I can’t read another word.

I dealt with this kind of shit for 20 years and reading this is triggering my PTSD.

Nobody, not Mother Teresa or even Jesus could but up with this insanity.

If this ended up being a Carvohi RAAC, I’d blow my fucking brains out.

After Gary.

I’d rather read a cuck story

GrimmerGrimmerabout 3 years ago

Jesucristo aka Gary ....

Demosthenes384bcDemosthenes384bcabout 3 years ago

Incredible journey continues...5*

argeelogargeelogover 2 years ago

And you leave the story here ? After all that ? I was too quick when I hit 3 stars. I take them all back.

carvohicarvohiover 2 years agoAuthor

Dear Argeelog: You're upset? You shouldn't be. There are two more parts. Please keep reading. I want to get your impression at the end.

carvohi

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Utter and complete garbage.

Almost unreadable. All I'm doing at this point is skimming a bit and then scoring each of these last stories as a 2.

Nobody would ever subject themselves or their children to this. How messed up are those daughters lives going to be?

Ludicrous.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Good Lord, Gary has to be a masochist.

He should look into getting psychiatric help for himself too.

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

That doctor... tells him some things but not others? Quack quack Quackety quack... Wife is in complete denial about her infidelity, that's a hell of a lot more than just OCD.

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