All Comments on 'Dear Diary...'

Hope you continue the reading.

Liked a lot. What a fun story. A very good job describing the sister's feelings as they changed. It would have been a nice touch to have mom's shocked commentary at the end of each entry; to give insight into mom's feelings as they progress to your sequel. Although it that might be distracting, it might also echo what you hope your readers are feeling as they join the siblings on their journey.

I know you realize the potential for a number of future chapters to be written. Good Job ! ! !

I enjoyed your story for the most part and I'm hoping as you continue that you'll keep it between brother and sister. I have the feeling that mom is going to join them soon and I wouldn't care for that. I also wish you would pay more attention to tense. Having present and past tenses in the same sentence makes your story harder to read. Thank you.

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Great story. It was very well did ne!

I really hope the next chapter appears soon

It's been almost two yearsand I would love to to read the continuation