by Goldeniangel
I was totally and completely wound up into the story, and then you change their names? One of the other chapters names the female as Kristen, and many chapters name the male as Luke. *cry*
It was sensationaly hot and wonderful but the change from Luke to Doug was a tad un-settling.
I'm reall confused abou he ending. who are doug and ellen? wha happened o luke?
sorr for missing leers, a couple leers do no work on m computer.
i love these kinds of stories i usually dont find alot of stories like this whichh i hate.
This story is perfect in every way and the girl isnt in danger like most stories ive seen wonderfull