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Trish looked at him.
"Stephan told me that you're having a difficult time. Though he didn't tell me why. Anyway, that's none of my business. But if you want to unload, I am a good listener. If you like me to join you, can I see your house?"
After some soul searching Rick replied.
"Come on in. I don't have coffee because I lack a coffee maker. Or a coffee pot. Oh and I don't have coffee at all."
Trish entered the house and looked around. After a good look, she asked.
"What are your priorities? I don't think that it makes sense to furnish the whole house at once. I suggest; livingroom, kitchen, bathroom and one bedroom. But first coffee and a bite to eat."
Rick told Trish that their first stop had to be the bank. He needed to pick up his credit card.
To be continued.
- COMMENTS
Sorchak3 months agoAs I read over the comments, I realize that some people haven't figured out that this is one of JoshFrom53's first attempts to write, the previous 2 chapters being his first. He also says that English is not his first language. Cut the guy some slack. I'm reading his first stories last, because I was saving the one with all the chapters in it. He gets better. Some commenters are saying how the characters are unbelievable, but given the state of a certain country south of where I live, I find it not-so-hard to believe at all. Just remember it's not real in the first place.
Anonymous3 months agoStill like it. A few questionable words interspersed but, still getting the story across.
Anonymous4 months agoI'm giving 3 stars only, because of the story I think you're trying to write. Where the 1st part needed a bit of help (your writing), this part needed a lot. I had to re-read some sentences over too many times to understand what you tried to say. I'm almost afraid of the 3rd part.
Likewise, from the beginning of him being in the new area, he's getting all these meetings with people; a young lady that fractured her ankle, the doctor, doc's mother... seriously? I've moved quite often & NEVER had anything close to this happen on day 1.
Moreover, he moves into a new house (for him) & doesn't have the basics for a meal & coffee? He's far from poor, having won the lottery. But the author makes him an overall idiot. Well, he had to be to suffer the continued disrespect, etc., given him from his wife. It's also hard to believe he didn't confront her a long time ago.
The wife, listening to her friend, needed a frontal lobotomy for continuing to listen to her while her marriage is going to hell in a handbasket. And she does this after 20+ years of marriage?
All these things together makes the believability portion lacking. Bob
