All Comments on 'Death on the Rhine Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Excellent

Loved an Australian 'animal' being there 'for the kill'. Good follow on and a hot character emerging in Folsom.

SadieRoseSadieRoseover 17 years ago
Warming up nicely

I've only marked this down cos I don't think it's as sharp as some of your short stories, but it's still very readable.

I liked this line much:

"Folsom found straps at the side and the head of the bed to hang onto in seas that were only rough in his cabin."

Will read on...

xx. Sadie

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