All Comments on 'Debauchery of Indian Wife Menaka Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Well started..

.. Looks promising... Add more sensuality in the description... Is it an expression of real life happenings?... Write like it feels there is music playing to the story in the readers mind when he reads it...

Feel free to send me your writings... 😊

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