All Comments on 'Debauchery Pt. 01'

Excellent, exciting and professional.

Fantastic story! Full of eroticism and mystery. I cannot wait to read part two. Please don't keep us waiting long. Just keep up the good work. I love everything you write.

Well done

Dr beulahthebrit; Brilliant, engaging start to what I hope will be an interesting story, just hope it's not too long before pt2 is posted.

Very well written, and although the premise is somewhat unbelievable in terms of degree, it holds together well and is very erotically arousing.

Great to read how much you put into this plot.

Gross, entertaining and erotic.

Attractive + Uninhibited is a great combination. At a HS reunion a few years ago my HS gf was fucked on the bed next to me while I fucked her HS best friend. Just before a couple came into our hotel room (a lot of people stayed over) and tried to jump in with the girl diving on top of my x and her boyfriend immediately trying for her friend who I fucked for months after that night - you can’t make this stuff up… if you are hot it finds you :)

saved this one for later. Now I have to read the remaining chapters

This story was entertaining and erotic, but parts of it didn't quite hold together. If Angela was over 18 and sexually active, why hadn't her mother started to teach her about sex and swinging? If she was sexually experienced, why was Angela so nonplussed and disgusted by her parent's sex toys? What could the lawyer have possibly said in an initial conversation over the phone that would make Derek collapse and bring down a successful international business? The narratve just doesn't seem logical.