All Comments on 'Deb's Adventures Ch. 01: Photo Shoot'

I really loved reading this, I’m a similar age and could identify with it. I’m hoping that you will do another chapter.

Loved the general storyline BUT the constant references to Lisa’s boyfriend were like a constant threat we were being hoodwinked. More photo shoots, with new m/f partners, spice & liberation. Include the studio crew too. (Please)

I love the way a women writes about the activities of other women. It is obvious that they know what they are talking about.

I liked the shoot as much as you, both of them. You we're so at ease with Leon you were swept right off your feet and on to your knees. I've seen stills of video do you think they do video with a pretend still session. Just thinking out of the box "(!)"

Super hot story! Can't wait to read more of your stories. This was a real turn on for me. I got hard as a rock reading this. The length of the story was just right.

this was well written, erotic consensual and so fun to read. well done

Definitely a great story, loved the descriptions and the build up and the melt down of resistance over time. Very believable and easy to picture it happening especially to me as Leon!

Don't know why I just discovered this story now. Absolutely love the plot, pacing, and the way you write a sex scene.