by deborah69
Don't know why I just discovered this story now. Absolutely love the plot, pacing, and the way you write a sex scene.
Definitely a great story, loved the descriptions and the build up and the melt down of resistance over time. Very believable and easy to picture it happening especially to me as Leon!
this was well written, erotic consensual and so fun to read. well done
Super hot story! Can't wait to read more of your stories. This was a real turn on for me. I got hard as a rock reading this. The length of the story was just right.
I liked the shoot as much as you, both of them. You we're so at ease with Leon you were swept right off your feet and on to your knees. I've seen stills of video do you think they do video with a pretend still session. Just thinking out of the box "(!)"
I love the way a women writes about the activities of other women. It is obvious that they know what they are talking about.
Loved the general storyline BUT the constant references to Lisa’s boyfriend were like a constant threat we were being hoodwinked. More photo shoots, with new m/f partners, spice & liberation. Include the studio crew too. (Please)
I really loved reading this, I’m a similar age and could identify with it. I’m hoping that you will do another chapter.